On March the 15th the year sixis of Wainui Beach School left for Camp Kaitawa. We stayed there for a week and it was so much fun. Once we came back we all created slides about camp and this is mine ....
Hello Klara it me Prince, I love how you really showed how you were feeling in the first slide. I have one question what was the most funniest thing you did at camp. The pics look like you had the time of your life.
Kia ora Klara, Your blog is great! I love how much detail you put in! I also love how you added in lots of images. I didn't put in nearly, that many. Next time you could try adding in a bit more writing. Over all, I thought your blog was great! Charlotte A
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Hello Klara it me Prince, I love how you really showed how you were feeling in the first slide.
ReplyDeleteI have one question what was the most funniest thing you did at camp.
The pics look like you had the time of your life.
Kia ora Klara,
ReplyDeleteYour blog is great! I love how much detail you put in! I also love how you added in lots of images. I didn't put in nearly, that many. Next time you could try adding in a bit more writing. Over all, I thought your blog was great!
Charlotte A